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(Remark: pose from Celestialess"s picture 76. Broken!)
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Music: Led Zeppelin – No Quarter.
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Commission For Katya Volnova
Hope you like! I think I've fainted. 
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Line-art and Colore by Taksict
Characters is Katya and her husband.
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©2010-2014 Taksict
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Errrrkk, well I don't often do critiques but this caught my eye so I'll give it a go. The first thing that struck her is the woman's contorted expression, which I really love! Awesome job showing her grief. However, the tears seem a little off- I can see some on the side of her head, which really doesn't make a lot of sense, if you ask me...

The shading looks pretty! I often see artists wh literally just slap on some sloppy shading in random places and hope it looks legit, but you avoided that, so yay!

One more thing that bothered me- her husband's neck looks a teeny bit swollen- which would be ok if he was suffering from some kind of neck injury, but I think it's a bit distracting to all the other great things you did in this piece. I like his expression though- you can tell he's in pain, and gasping for breath. ( at least I think so, lol)

All in all, I feel you did a pretty darn god job! A little bit of me died seeing this woman grieving over her husband. Wonderful job conveying the overall emotion of the pic!